Revise pages 1-10

worked on pages 1-10, adding more details.  the rewrite begins!

Edit 184-191

finished the typo editing.  Now it's back to rewriting.  83,000 words presently.  Hooray!

Edited 176-184

Edited pages 176-184 in LP.  Almost done with editing for typos.  Then it's back to rewriting!

Edited 165-175

Edited 165-175  on LP.

Edited 158-164

Edited 158-164 in LP project.

Edited 148-158

Edited 148-158 in LP.